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Old 11-27-2006, 02:24 AM
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A walk down the street of life

I walk down the street.
There's a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I fall in.
I am lost.....I am helpless;
it isn't my fault.
It takes forever to find a way out.

I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I pretend I don't see it.
I fall in again.
I can't believe I am in the same place;
but it isn't my fault.
It still takes a long time to get out.

I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I see it is there.
I still fall in....it's a habit.
My eyes are open.
I know where I am.
It is my fault.
I get out immediately.

I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I walk around it.

I walk down a different street.
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Old 12-11-2006, 08:29 AM
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This is a good poem

good lesson lent
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Old 12-11-2006, 08:32 AM
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it somehow sounds funny, too much "walk" and street and such hehehhehe

the moral of it is good i know, just, didn't feel right enough
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