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Old 06-30-2006, 10:16 AM
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Oh Night!!!!

Why this time is holding my hand,
why it is not ready to pass-by.
My heart has stopped beating as if,
the reason to beat is lost in a sigh.

I am eager to hear your voice,
which makes me feel you are near.
I just close my eyes and think about you.
And my cheeks can feel the wetness of my tears.

Holding my pillow and giving it a hug,
makes me feel in your arms
But I feel something still lacking,
as this pillow cannot give your warmth.


This night seems so long to me.
a second passes like an hour.
I miss you at this time my beloved,
so I spend the night looking at the stars.

Oh night! Please get over
or make me sleep soon.
As its hard to spent the time
just staring at the silent moon.
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Old 06-30-2006, 12:11 PM
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GOOD NIGHT AND GOOD LUCK

Friend withmahi,
I think your night is so long .It make a good feeling for me ! :lol: How are you ?I think you are so lonely without your lover,,,,,,,,,,
As for me ,night are so long at the friday , the day for tomorrow school and the day for my return to my native .
May I addvise you for your decoration of your bed . :lol: Pinch color can make you for sweet dream and white color can make you for falling sleep with pleasant mind .
I pray for you that you may be good dream and good luck for for your short days .
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Old 12-11-2006, 09:34 AM
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Good Poem

Oh Night !!!

ever felt like that
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Old 01-10-2007, 06:35 AM
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SOUNDS GOOD
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Old 10-22-2008, 10:33 PM
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hi it's a nice poem.It is very sweet and soft to hear. words are very impressive and attractive.

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