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Old 05-31-2006, 01:47 PM
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This poem that I wrote

It goes

This Poem

This poem is the answer
This poem is the reminder
This poem is mine.
This poem is about reasons
Reasons they call me, what they call me
This poem should make you understand
Understand why they call me, what they call me
This poem should tell you how come
How come I let them call me, what the call me
This poem will not make you laugh
Even if you love
You will not attempt to sigh
This poem is simple
It is just a poem;
And it's mine.

[/i]Elliot 'ERASER' Mnisi

If you love this, there's more where it came from
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Old 06-09-2006, 10:30 AM
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You, you, you...

Sounds like a poem written as if someone is in append of his own personality and still searching for the wants of life.

Nice ^^
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Old 07-20-2006, 02:35 PM
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It's straight-forward, simple(as it stated), and a good one too read. Although, in my opinion, no offence, it was a bit obsessive or perhaps defensive?
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Old 08-08-2006, 11:47 AM
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You should know what they call you
You should tell them why they call you
We will wait n watch your reaction
When we say its a rejection or acception

Hope u won't cry
but always smile
even us waiting for time while
you say why they call you a ________


Fill in the blanks Maaaaaaaannnnnnnnn.
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